Mar05
I think we’re starting to see why I decided to tag Carter with an arrow. Also, I think my reordering of the final scenes has worked out pretty well. We’re in the home stretch now. You may also have noticed by now that I’ve eliminated the Apache coming across the cave in the mountain. In this format it’s kind of repetitive and doesn’t serve much of a purpose in moving the (comic) story forward.
Personally I would have liked to have had some indication that the Apache feared this particular cave. I think that’s an important story element but I can see your point.
Another great strip. I really like the use of shadows in this one.
Yeah, at this point I’m thinking I really just need to keep the story moving forward as best I can. That would slow things down for a couple of months at least.